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Post by crisis on Oct 31, 2009 1:52:15 GMT 12
I'm not sure how to remove that previous app. Name : Kevin Crosser Age : 13 Appearance : Kevin has dark brown hair which drops down roughly above his slightly yellowish brown eyes. His eyes carry a sense of hostilty. His neck is a little long and strangely, he wears a collar around it. His wears a dark brownish shirt which is a little too loose for him around his shoulders. He wears a dark greenish pouch around his waist which he stores a water container, and right below it he places the 'scabbard' for his baton. He brings with him a long bandage stained with blood. Background : Kevin wakes up with barely any memory of his past. He only remembers his name and he was on some kind of ship, and suddenly he had been pushed inside a pod. He remembers the text 'CYROGENIC FREEZE INITIATED' on a red screen. The next thing he knows, he wakes up inside the pod on a remote planet with only a baton, a bandage and an empty pouch... Equipment : Having with him only his pouch with a water container, his metal baton, and the blood-stained bandage that was with him, Kevin stands little hope against a harsh world completely stranger to him, and less still with his memories lost.
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Post by ~Wicked on Oct 31, 2009 14:25:33 GMT 12
I'm gonna let Dai handle this one; Yes you should count the bandage as equipment, but I wouldn't count the collar as it's a part of his apparel. You haven't been in the rp yet, aside from the intro post (which can easily be removed), so I would say ok, but I'm going to run it by Dai first.
But I would suggest getting the fact that he was on the ship in your history. You don't have to go into detail, but please add it. ^.^
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Post by crisis on Oct 31, 2009 17:49:01 GMT 12
Would that do the trick?
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Post by Dai on Nov 1, 2009 18:19:47 GMT 12
Hmmmm.... To be completely honest, I'd call BOTH the baton AND the batteries unique... Your history does have a memory of the ship, but our plot initiates when the pod has just hit Planet, or when you are in transit.
I'm going to deny this one for now... Two more attempts available.
(Also, since you have only posted on Welcome to Planet, I will allow this. If you had posted on more, it would have been messy to clean up.)
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Post by crisis on Nov 2, 2009 13:03:44 GMT 12
I edited the equipment. But what should I edit about the background?
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Post by Dai on Nov 2, 2009 13:27:58 GMT 12
Screw it... I'll accept this. The background isn't that bad, so I'll go through with it. Just remember to re-post on Welcome....
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